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Ashlander's avatar

The bit on the use of modern terms is interesting, because Dragon Age: The Veilguard (my white whale of bad fantasy media) did this in a very similar way. 'Therapist' is basically the only modernism it doesn't use, which is strange given that so much of the dialogue given to the main character is 100% therapeutic language, which is used in a really obvious and cringey way.

What it does use ad nauseum is 'team' (disgustingly corporate language, and inappropriate in the context), and it also uses non-binary, a term most people probably hadn't heard of before the 2020s, which makes it sound very jarring in-game. They even threw out a perfectly serviceable in-universe term which conveyed the same idea.

But maybe Stormlight can get away with the odd modernism, if it actually discusses trauma in a meaningful way? Veilguard's problem is that it's so globally terrible that you basically can't overlook any individual facet.

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Minaz Ansari's avatar

Interesting and well analysed. I hope to read these some day

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